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I need help with parallelism in sentences !! thanks!!?
here they are
1. I choose to make my own computer because it will come a lot cheaper, good performance, and will be at its best.
2.The warranty does nor cover wnd damage, physical damage, and ifit is stolen or lost.
3. He found it highly invasive of privacy and that it did nothing to stanch the flow of weapons into schools.
4. First, the Cadillac had more room, fully loaded, and had a six-disk CD charger.
5.So if you value good fuel economy, fuel cost, and plan to keep it more than 100000 miles, you would choose a diesel engine truck.
6. As you can see, the A-S is cheaper, more reliable and has more durability compare to the Piranha EVO.
7. Abercombie always has someone to greet you when you come in, helpers in the fitting rooms as well as o the floor, and it's a lot more organized because they are constantly folding and organizing clothes.
9. As months go by, the carneeds to be well maintained such as rotation in tires, change of brakes, have an oil change.
Parallelism means each item in a set takes on a similar construction. Take the first sentence for example.
1. I choose to make my own computer because (THREE REASONS):
a. it will come a lot cheaper
b. good performance
c. will be at its best.
Now, if your sentence is written with parallelism, any of the three reasons should read correctly. The first one is fine on its own, but "I choose to make my own computer because good performance" and "I choose to make my own computer because will be at its best" do not make sense. They should say something like "I choose to make my own computer because it will perform better" and "...because it will be at its best."
So the full sentence should read, "I choose to make my own computer because it will come a lot cheaper, it will perform better, and it will be at its best."
Isn't that much better? I hope this information will help you solve #2-8. Feel free to contact me with specific questions or if you want me to check your work.
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